New ending

 In class, we read thirst, and our task was to make up our own ending

I think I have done the following well:

some I still need to work on is:

Hot Task  Week 6 Creative Writing kash

           

Dad shouted one more  time at the top of his lungs  and said.    ‘’You better get here now else you'll get into big trouble when I find out boy’’. But still no response from Ryder so dad sent out a search party to go and find him . So they searched for days but Ryder was nowhere to be found.Our  scene? So his mum started to over exaggerate  and said that if he died or got through trauma he might have a heart attack  - then she said it might take a  month a year then his dad said don’t think of the worst. Stay positive and said we will find him and then brook said he was feeling guilty and just took off well i was having a wash and he left a notice saying i'll be fine i'll be back in a few weeks . Then his dad gos for a night ride on his bike he sees a glip of Ryder heir  and hunt him down and says you're getting a 1.2 When we get home the more Ryder thought about it, the more it heart  his dad said 2 minit later they get home and Ryder run srat to his room to put five layer of cloves on.Then his dad said get here now then he get give in  a leaf right goodnight  you will do hard labor if I have to pay anything you little brat. I want toput you out of exsistence  you. I wish you will go and find another family . Then his face turned red and he dropped on his nes and said sorry dad. I just wanted to be a hero for once in my life. And his dad said you're pushing my button I want to end your  extins do you understand and Ryder nods yes and his eyes start to water. 

                                               

Then his dad comes and says sorry for being so hard on you. I hope you can forgive me son and then they go for a morning stroll to sort everything out , then Ryder gets a job and pays for all of his damage . A 16 year go by and Ryder becomes the owner of the water copine so we can say because  he stole the water it will be amazing for him from that day later.

                       

                                               

In the end Ryder became the richest man in the world and he owned water components all over the world and he even owned 22 in the US of America.  His family was proud of him