My narrative

This term we have been doing narrative writing and longing to show not  tell but I am developing it    

The world is ending 

                                         

Once there lived a boy named Tj in 2025 the revolting cities faded away and shattered one by one. It was sad to watch everything he had vanished just like that, even his family is gone, but he has to accept the fact that they're gone. So he goes and explores the place he is worried about. He decides to pray to God, and ask him for help throughout his journey.

The problem is that Tj’s family is missing and there are no people to be seen in the city, it is slowly breaking apart.  The animals are like a swarm of bees foraging the place. The highway is getting fragmented by the animals.  The city is overrun by bees.  Tj jumps on the dirtbike and has a look at the place and these drones are following him and then he finds a digital device called the xx 3 2 that the drones need the personal information that Tj has.

The 3 robots flooded the city tormenting the poor defenseless animals. Determined, Tj flies across and onto the robot and stabbed his dagger into its back. It exploded.  

He finds his family in a city with people there and no one gets hurt and he is happy that he is safe and Tj start saying thank you, Jesus.  In the end, he found his family and more people he was relieved. S all went well